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Member Showcase => Member Poetry => Topic started by: IBB on November 22, 2007, 06:09:17 AM

Title: Garden of Rose
Post by: IBB on November 22, 2007, 06:09:17 AM
I'm not good at this but let me try. Ait dont laugh tell me what you think of it

I wrote it for my one n only here we go

Him: Me and you, baby can we take a walk?

Her: We can walk, baby hold my hand

Him: Me and you, baby can we walk?

Her: We can walk, walk to the garden of roses

Him: Me and you, baby can we chat?

Her: We can chat, chat in the garden with roses

Him: Me and you, baby can we sit?

Her: We can sit, sit in the garden of roses

Him: Me and you, baby can we love?

Her: We can love, love in the garden with roses

Title: Re: Garden of Rose
Post by: Ibro2g on January 14, 2008, 02:32:34 PM
lol thats so nice really... the more u try the better u become. Seduce ur mind and hands into writing, u'll be suprised what u'll come up with.
leep it up

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