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Title: LOVE AND HARDY'S TESS.
Post by: Ummulhuda on January 31, 2003, 08:11:20 PM
Love was the heartbreak Tess felt, and the slight,
When Angel left her on their wedding night.

Love was the despair Tess felt, and hopelessness
When Angel asked her forgiveness

Love was the madness that drove Tess
To pierce a knife into Alex's heart.

Love was the passion Angel felt
When he accepted Tess in her blemished state.

Love was the calmness that tranquilled Tess
When she faced her final fate.

Love was Tess's Phoenix risen from the ashes,
As her sister in marital unison, forgave the man called Angel Claire.
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Post by: Fulanizzle on February 01, 2003, 12:34:44 AM
real talent
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Post by: Ummulhuda on February 01, 2003, 05:34:21 PM
Thanx
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Post by: Anonymous on February 01, 2003, 06:21:37 PM
I have to agree here and not be mean. This is cantafabulously written out. SPOT ON GURL!!!
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Post by: Ummulhuda on February 01, 2003, 07:50:54 PM
My head go bigin swell fa, I no fit carry large head for dis my fragile neck!!!!!!!!
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Post by: nura on February 03, 2003, 06:43:43 PM
Oh 'Huda what a treat
this is so nice
So you are so full of wit
and you are this wise
So what happened to Tess
This is so cool
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Post by: Ummulhuda on February 03, 2003, 06:50:54 PM
You really want to know what happened to Poor Tess?
She was hanged for murder poor innocent Tess! (She really did kill Alex though). I cried for months after I read that novel.
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Post by: nura on February 05, 2003, 11:29:06 AM
Oh poor Tess!
what a mess
at least she's now at rest
As love for Alex
Bring her to the end of her days

Let's look before we love
To avoid a similar end
Let's not make loss
In love let's always gain
And unlike Tess elongate our days

'Huda I still doff my hat
To you I've to give due respect
Clearly the talent and wit you have
Separate you from the rest
of us who must learn from your ways
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Post by: Ummulhuda on February 05, 2003, 05:18:28 PM
Oh Gosh!
My head's now bigger than Humpty Dumpty's!!!!!!!!
Shucks Guys thanx for the compliment!!!!!!!
But AbuM, you're quite a poet yourself. Why don't you pen something and put it up?
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Post by: Aydee Fella on February 08, 2003, 06:35:49 AM
kai Ummul Hudaa u really tried up there.AbuMujahid gaskiya ka burge ni.
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Post by: Bilyaminu on February 10, 2003, 12:13:07 AM
:'( :-[ :'(
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Post by: Ummulhuda on February 10, 2003, 11:46:12 AM
Quote:'( :-[ :'(
Ahhh, How sad. :-/
Cheerup dear.
Here, have a hanky and mop up those tears
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Post by: Waziri on February 10, 2003, 12:11:46 PM
This is a good work.

Poetry according to popular definition: is a spontaneous overflow of emotions captured in tranquility. Abu Mujahid's pen is indeed a sponstaneous one.

Ummu keep the exploration in the see of creativity. It is what makes the world go round, round and round.
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Post by: Blaqueen on February 24, 2003, 02:32:50 PM
 nice nice nice and funny....... i have an odd sense of humor... so..why not maimuna and tanko? ali and hasiya...? y'know..... :)
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Post by: Ibro2g on February 27, 2003, 04:33:55 AM
I guess most of our Ideologies are foriegn.
Nice work ummulhuda, plus I'd watchout 4 further posts.
And AbuMuja...kana yagana.
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Post by: Ummulhuda on February 28, 2003, 07:43:06 PM
Quote nice nice nice and funny....... i have an odd sense of humor... so..why not maimuna and tanko? ali and hasiya...? y'know..... :)

Actually FDQ, the poem was inspired by the book 'Tess of the Durbervilles.' It was a book that left a very powerful impression in my mind and I was at a very impressionable age when I read it and the poem is just a way of exorcing it out of my system.
So naming the ppl in the poem maimuna or tanko or ali or hasiya wouldn't have helped me.
Having spilled out the shell of the story I feel I can forget about it finally.