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Offline Jibo

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A Walk In The Cloud
« on: November 03, 2008, 10:15:46 AM »
Out of the burnt field and ashes
Out-grown the burning flames
Out-living the heat of the anger

There! It blossoms out true love and life
And all that is lost is recovered in a field of hope and faith
For all that is gone is never lost
And what is burnt can survive to live
In faith and in love

For determination and the will to conviction
Be stronger than ever
And think that you never
Walk in the dusty cloud
But on solitary soft and smooth cloud of time.
A lazy youth is definitely a begging adult! Bata hankalin Dare ka yi suna!: Fas'alu ahalil zikri, inkuntum la ta'alamun!

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Re: A Walk In The Cloud
« Reply #1 on: November 03, 2008, 05:50:13 PM »
...

There! It blossoms out true love and life
And all that is lost is recovered in a field of hope and faith
...In faith and in love

our jibo is in love! who is the lucky babe? congrats.
to walk in the cloud you know that you have to consult Bk-Gizo .

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Re: A Walk In The Cloud
« Reply #2 on: November 05, 2008, 11:21:25 AM »
A strong poem that helps us to see beyond the pain of delay and disappointment. Whatever you have found, Jibo, thank you for sharing it with us in this uniquely uplifting way!
haring my life in simple poems

 


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