Against All Odds

[Maleeq]

                          Against All Odds

Against all odds,we shall conquer
Against all odds,we shall prosper
We cannot be decieved
For we have seek to achieve
An achievement full of passion
An achievement as one nation
Yes,failure is not our course of action
But rather success is our only option
The elite display senseless abasement
Much to the commoners' resentment
We fight and strive to fully obliterate
All  persistant miseries of the state
I write this for a particular reason
For in your eyes there is a vision
A vision that will bring us together
A vision that will make us stronger
Against all odds,we shall conquer
Against all odds,we shall prosper

[Waziri]

Tis good, it carries a ting of oratorial prowess. Maleeq, u will make a good orator.
 

[adamuadamu]

kai though i'm new here but i gat to admit it this is truly a masterpiece
  man gaskiya ka yi kokari una welldon

[Maleeq]

hey guyz thanx for ure commentz.its tha sort of thang that makes u wanna write and write...cuz it kinna tells u people are appreciative of whachu doin and that u can do better.
       waziri plz read my latest poem The competition.its quite nice i think(LOL)

[Blaqueen]

really impressive........

[Fulanizzle]

amma yayi kiaw sosai

[Maleeq]

Well thanx for tha commentz.u know i kinna write thiz thangs to make them sound motivational in a way su'mn that will kinna make one get a bit hyper and relaxed at thesame tyme(crazy right).nnywayz....






                         I'm out ;) :D

[Anonymous]

To be honest none of them told you the truth about your peom. Should I be honest?.................This is one superwrittepoemwhichhasbeenwellwritten. Spot on man!!

[Maleeq]

hey hafsa for a moment i waz lik "wats thiz gal up to agian"  ???  until i procceded and saw wat u actually said    

    nnywayz thankz for that





                      i'm out :D ;)

[Ibro2g]

make one get a bit hyper and relaxed at thesame tyme(crazy right).

....I thought I was crazy? huh dazz?

[Maleeq]

....I thought I was crazy? huh dazz?

well i guess we all are crazy.....mi and u ;D
ight serious man i gat to dmit it iwaz kinna uncertain about tha whole thang but thank God now i have seen the LIGHT......or whachu think?

[Ibro2g]

you sure did.