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Offline Ihsan

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Last Breath
« on: October 20, 2002, 11:25:55 AM »
From those around I hear a Cry,
A muffled sob, a Hopeless sigh,
I hear their footsteps leaving slow,
And then I know my soul must Fly!

A chilly wind begins to blow,
Within my soul, from Head to Toe,
And then, Last Breath escapes my lips,
It's Time to leave.And I must Go!

So, it is True (But it's too Late)
They said: Each soul has its Given Date,
When it must leave its body's core,
And meet with its Eternal Fate.

Oh GOD! Oh GOD! I cannot see!
My eyes are Blind! Am I still Me?!
Or has my soul been led astray,
And forced to pay a Priceless Fee?!

Alas to Dust we all return,
Some shall rejoice, while others burn,
If only I knew that before
The line grew short, and came my Turn!

And now, as beneath the sod
They lay me (with my record flawed),
They cry, not knowing I cry worse,
For, they go home, I face my God!

Oh mark the words that I do say,
Who knows? Tomorrow could be your Day,
At last, it comes to Heaven or Hell
Decide which now, Do NOT delay!

Pray!
greetings from Ihsaneey

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Re: Last Breath
« Reply #1 on: October 26, 2002, 03:05:37 AM »
i'd say you have beautiful penmanship
                    keep it up ;)
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Re: Last Breath
« Reply #2 on: October 29, 2002, 04:13:37 PM »
enh... or she has beautiful copyandpastemanship
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Re: Last Breath
« Reply #3 on: October 30, 2002, 12:20:36 PM »
Ato. copyandpastemanship  na dat she has wo.no be penmanship

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Re: Last Breath
« Reply #4 on: October 30, 2002, 03:28:38 PM »
Guyz,
Let d gal be! She tried putting up sumthing up, copy&pastemanship, or penship or wat eva, doesnt matter. Since u guyz read it up then its worth it. Ta dai fi wasu
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Re: Last Breath
« Reply #5 on: October 30, 2002, 03:49:56 PM »
ah...wait oh!....ihsan is my granny!!!!!... and i'm her aunty...  ;D
i can make fun of my "kaka" anytyme.....  8)
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Re: Last Breath
« Reply #6 on: October 31, 2002, 09:35:52 AM »
Granny??? aunty???  ;D

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Re: Last Breath
« Reply #7 on: November 01, 2002, 01:39:30 PM »
i know i know.... but ish happens....  ::)
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Re: Last Breath
« Reply #8 on: November 03, 2002, 10:37:40 AM »
Oh my...Fyne!!!  :'(  ;D...now what does that make me to u or u to me? ;D

Ok...I'm off to look for more poems to COPY and PASTE  ;D cause that's the ONLY way ;D I can post anything in here (the Member Poetry board)
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Re: Last Breath
« Reply #9 on: November 22, 2002, 10:08:01 PM »
Thats preety :o impressive, scary though. And I believe this are your words never mind the whatever-manship, okay.
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Re: Last Breath
« Reply #10 on: November 29, 2002, 02:56:29 AM »
e be like i go begin dey copy and paste other peope's work ,Ibro i think that crazy book of urs iz still with me.U know its got a lotta nyce things in it.
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