Mhm?
It Strips me off naughty pride.
It?s your name;
It carries
The noble fragrance
That dethrones
the stench,
Which embeds
my souring heart.
It is the jewel
that ornaments
my presence,
In both the abstract
and the real world.
In desperation,
Alas!
In desperation
I crave for
your undaunted love.
This one is pure romance as if I was reading Charles Dickens. Remember that part in Oliver Twist?
no.... ::) not really...
MHMMMM.....R U REALATED 2 SHAKESPHERE?? :-* I DONT LIKE LOVY LOVY WORDS, BUT ALL D SAME ITS ALL GOOD..
Ummita,
It appears like you had a souring experience with lovy lovy words... Well, I think some r an expression of sincere feelings
Cumon Waziri act ryt,!!! neva had sourin lovy's (poem) but I'd say u aint aimin rty> Butta up ok... 2 me poem with luvs r just funny words 'n' hardly enione even d author of MHM.. knows wat poems with luv really is.. but all d same ur poem is nice 'n' ... nut 2 worry am holdin on 4 u 2 win the contest.. or am gon be in my arm chair laughin my head out when sumone loo......s...es... but seriously Waziri ur poem is surely against all odds.. keep it goin.. its all good
Ummita,
Nagode, I will try to learn how to act right. Thank u for the compliment. But I think we should be a bit more formal and polite in approach espicially next time.
I respect u
Waziri
I am so super polite when it cums 2 approach.. nima I respect u..shikenan :D It was meant 2 b a joke. No hard feelins
Ummita,
I like ur humility. Thanks all the same. It really a joke ;)
... In har ke bakanuwa ce to ki harzarta canja "gene". cos u r to good to be one. u r fit to be mutumiyar ZAZZAU the great ne.
i guess i can say i'm lost.... ::)
Absolutely ryt Waziri :D am 1/2 Bazzazagiya 8) fully fulani from Mali but neva been there so Zaria is my home. Idan wajen wasan gari ne, honestly I no fit, coz ana cutana a wajen sosai. :D So r u preparin another poem with luv word in 'em ;)
ziriQueen, ur very funny, Idan ke u r lost then we we are found ne anan wurin. kinji ko...
... Ummita a garin Zaria which side did you come from?
Uhm ...I think I write for people and if they think they don't want poems with love "contents" ai kinga sai inyi hakuri da kawo irin wadannan poems din public ko? But the truth of the matter is: poetry is naturally a tribute to love and grief. And what is unforfortunate about love is its romance with tears, for whenever there is love then there most be tears.
This indeed are what find outlet in poetry.
Waziri
Queen, ur very funny, Idan ke u r lost then we we are found ne anan wurin. kinji ko...
... Ummita a garin Zaria which side did you come from?
Uhm ...I think I write for people and if they think they don't want poems with love "contents" ai kinga sai inyi hakuri da kawo irin wadannan poems din public ko? But the truth of the matter is: poetry is naturally a tribute to love and grief. And what is unforfortunate about love is its romance with tears, for whenever there is love then there most be tears.
These indeed are what find outlet in my poetry.
Waziri
Sorry to chip in but what exactly does "MHM" stands for. I appologize for my ignorance on this matter, because i personally think particle physics not poetry makes a better past time. Any way, mallam Waziri nasan our paths have crossed before and I admire your eloquence but it appears to me kamar kafara baude wa.
I mean........ well da dai kafi serious amma yanzu.......... bansani ba.
Enough said, I do like to know what you make of Classical music which happens to be the favourite hobby of philosophers, royals and perhaps commoners of Shakespearean Era.This does have a correlation with what you are talking about huh?
As I said earlier I have no idea what you're talking about but, shis'shi gi ne ya kawoni.
I hope Iam welcome
CIAO
happy ramadan
PS: Not related to Wazirin Kano I hope, because I should start treating you with respect.
Waziri I say u go 4 it, u've got d talents 2 put them luv words in2 writin so, get crackin but as Amin said (with regards 2 MHM) Yeah I think givin them special titles is gr8t eg: Wat luv possess ::) Though as I said am not in2 luv word so I know u could figure out gr8t titles 4 ur gr8t poems. Amman words din sunyi zafi dayawa :P 8)
Ok. Interesting, Aminuddeen kasan har kullum muna yin maganane tare da duban subject matter din da ake disscussing don shine yake determining channel na zancen wato ko serious ko kuma ba serious ba.
Actually MHM... ba wani abu bane illa irin abinnan "Gasp" bature kance mashi ko? Kaman idan ana magana sai kaji ance kamar misali: Mhm, aikuwa ina gani ba haka bane.
Aminuddeen poetry rhymes with my body chemistry a lot it forms the cellular construction of my mind. I think a part from my God, what I need most in my life is my poetry or atleast poor-try on which my soul feeds, then perharps my Computer. Note that physics or metaphysics are a part and parcel of poetry; they form its symbols and fashion its tastes springboarding its aesthetics.
I am a bonafide Bazazzagi from Zaria. I am not related to Waziri kano, Aminu u can treat me like a buddy or a collegue.
Ummita thank u once again for flattering or maybe flattening :D
Waziri
Way 2 go Waziri....Yeah!!!! U tell him. Amin d man says poetry ryms with his body chemistry 8)
Guest I totally agree with you.