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Title: sweeter than all existing things
Post by: kilishi on October 13, 2003, 08:45:57 PM
      There is in this world something
      That surpasses all other things in sweetness
      It is sweeter than honey
      It is sweeter than salt
      It is sweeter than sugar
      It is sweeter than all existing things



     This thing is sleep
     When you are conquered by sleep
     nothing can ever prevent you
     nothing can stop you from sleeping
     when you are conqured by sleep and
     numerous millions arrive
     millions arrive to disturb you
     millions will find you asleep
Title: Re: sweeter than all existing things
Post by: gogannaka on October 14, 2003, 12:41:34 AM
Nice one!!!.................amma dai lallai kina son barci....wai!
Title: Re: sweeter than all existing things
Post by: Barde on October 14, 2003, 08:57:16 AM
QuoteNice one!!!.................amma dai lallai kina son barci....wai!

Ai mallam bacci abunsone especially the early morning one in a very dark room,anaruwa,with a very soft blanket...i won't mind sleeping the whole day...karma atadani inci abinci.
Title: Re: sweeter than all existing things
Post by: zezezee on October 14, 2003, 04:24:19 PM
my sista u really like sleep wooo!
but it can b fun sha
Title: Re: sweeter than all existing things
Post by: ummita on October 18, 2003, 12:47:20 AM
 Ya'all r juss tlkin. TSE-TSE FLY has finally finished all that is left in ur blood veins how wont u all not sleep? ::) Mah dear Kilishi, ur poems r so nice simple ans short......major objective in poetry writing is makin it short    & simple & this is one uniqueness u hav. Nice poem
Title: Re: sweeter than all existing things
Post by: Ibro2g on October 31, 2003, 04:50:32 AM
Hahahahah....Na dade ban karanta abun da ya ban dariya ba irin wannan...nice piece anywayz