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Title: Misery
Post by: Ibro2g on January 19, 2003, 12:50:19 PM

I sit out of the crowd
all alone in the dark.
I see neglect and lame
and defeat and pain
but I never complain.
I see lights far away
they never come my way.
I remain locked in despair
what I feel,non could bare.
I go to bed every night
wishing to sleep if I might
wake up late to see light
as short days are my light
but I barely sleep every night.
sometimes I don't want to wake
but I wake and yet no brake
to the misery, it's not fake.
My misery flow in my veins
and drain my poor brains
instantly vaporising my aims.
I find too much of an enemy
and found there is no any me.
So, I'm lost, cast and frost,
suspended above three worlds
each I barely belong to
non I really fit into.
My misery and me are addicted
and it's just too complicated.
deliver me before my sucidal death.

PLEASE!!!

Title: Re: Misery
Post by: Blaqueen on January 20, 2003, 01:27:25 AM

so young... so depressed... damn that pop music!!!!! but u nevah hear word....

Title: Re: Misery
Post by: Maleeq on January 20, 2003, 06:46:11 AM

God i hate such sad poems:( nice effort though
    Oya ibrahim she don warn u

Title: Re: Misery
Post by: Waziri on January 20, 2003, 11:22:45 AM

Ibro,

This is the best of ur posts so far. There is nothing wrong with it being sad. Poetry is naturally a tribute to love and grief. This poem is a MASTER PIECE.

NOTE: This is the SINCEREst of my comments.

Title: Re: Misery
Post by: Ibro2g on January 20, 2003, 03:43:20 PM

Yah I don`t think it`s pop or rock or mettalica. It`s just me.
And thankz waz...just hope things will be better

Title: Re: Misery
Post by: Fulanizzle on February 01, 2003, 04:17:53 AM

dan kastina, i love it!!!!!!!!!

Title: Re: Misery
Post by: Ibro2g on February 25, 2003, 05:58:04 AM

yah nafy, itz mah reality.

Title: Re: Misery
Post by: Rose on February 26, 2003, 01:22:37 AM

Katsinian hang on!
Life is very promising
and the light may not be that far,
It just need a little bit of struggle
:)

Title: Re: Misery
Post by: Ibro2g on February 26, 2003, 02:59:29 PM

Thanks Ice, ur so cool. I later realised the light was still visible and I afterwards wrote "light up a candle"...just 4 da light. Thank God I'm alive. and thank God 4 peeps like u.

adios amigoz

Title: Re: Misery
Post by: Maleeq on March 03, 2003, 05:09:20 AM

QuoteThanks Ice, ur so cool.

yah it remains evident from tha name.

Title: Re: Misery
Post by: Rose on March 07, 2003, 12:10:32 AM

QuoteThanks Ice, ur so cool. I later realised the light was still visible and I afterwards wrote "light up a candle"...just 4 da light. Thank God I'm alive. and thank God 4 peeps like u.
adios amigoz

You are very welcome
my dear Ibro :)
and very nice to know that
you have seen the light.
keep your heart open
and that light will continue to shine
Inshah Allah.

QuotePosted by: abdulmaleeq Posted on: 03/03/03 at 02:09:20
yah it remains evident from tha name.

Thats nice abdulmalik
Thanks :)

Title: Re: Misery
Post by: Ibro2g on March 07, 2003, 01:25:15 AM

Ameen

Title: Misery
Post by: Anonymous on May 02, 2005, 08:10:53 AM

Ibro2g I completely agree with your words.

Title: Misery
Post by: guest2 on May 02, 2005, 08:58:53 PM

Quote from: "Anonymous"Ibro2g I completely agree with your words.

MUMU....go and agree with urself first b4 agreeing wid oda ppl

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