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Title: WHY I LOVE U.
Post by: bobboss on January 08, 2005, 04:02:06 PM
I love thee freely,
as men strive for Right;
I love thee purely,
as they turn from Praise.
I love thee with the passion
put to use In my old griefs,

And with my childhood's faith.
I love thee with a love I seemed to
i love thee for who she is
i love thee for a wild romance we did.
Title: WHY I LOVE U.
Post by: elgaazus on January 08, 2005, 07:38:45 PM
Kai!!!!!!!!!! bobboss
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Post by: Anonymous on January 09, 2005, 05:13:12 PM
"i love thee" what a unique quote, luv the poem.keep what worth keeping :D
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Post by: Ibro2g on February 11, 2005, 09:47:41 PM
 I like thee poetry... Thou shall expect more I guess...?
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Post by: Tukurtukur on July 10, 2005, 11:07:00 AM
This is a good poem.  it has a good rythm and captivating flow.  the sound is soothing and romantic.

However, I try to look for the object of the poem but could not find any.  Who do you love?  the person's imagery could have been embedded in the poem.

The poem is about love and the question was asked why I love U?  The attempt at giving the reason for the love as purity (I love thee purely) was shattered by infatuation rather than pure love (i love thee for a wild romance we did).

Anyway it is a well written poem.
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Post by: amira on February 14, 2006, 11:51:49 PM
Ehen.. sum nice poetry u av
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Post by: *~MuDa~* on March 29, 2006, 08:14:40 PM
Quote from: "Tukurtukur"(i love thee for a wild romance we did).


Chei!!?!!
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Post by: Fulani Poet on June 16, 2006, 05:06:10 PM
Mine friend, thou hast crafted a fine poem!

The third line of the second stanza says 'i love thee for who she is.' Who is this 'she' that inspires this love? Leaves the meaning a bit fuzzy. Certainly no one will like to be loved for what 'another' is! Could you please say more about the poem? I love it!
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Post by: HUSNAA on June 18, 2006, 01:58:00 PM
Quote from: "Fulani Poet"
The third line of the second stanza says 'i love thee for who she is.' Who is this 'she' that inspires this love? Leaves the meaning a bit fuzzy. Certainly no one will like to be loved for what 'another' is! Could you please say more about the poem? I love it!

I think he is talking to his child about his love for the child, not a love for a woman.
'I love thee for who she is'. Maybe 'she' is the mother of the child. And clearly he loves the mother as well since part of the love for the child stems from 'who she is'  
'I love thee for a wild romance we did'. Resulting in the child?

Nice poem. Reminds me of a very famous poem for which I can neither remember the author nor the words bcos I never paid much attention to them at sch (so boring) It goes: for what do I love thee? I love thee for......' etc etc
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Post by: Fulani Poet on July 04, 2006, 10:49:27 AM
Thou hast spoken well, Husnaa! I still await the poet's response though.
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Post by: HUSNAA on July 04, 2006, 01:22:41 PM
Quote from: "HUSNAA"

Nice poem. Reminds me of a very famous poem for which I can neither remember the author nor the words bcos I never paid much attention to them at sch (so boring) It goes: for what do I love thee? I love thee for......' etc etc

OOps!! its 'How much do I love thee?' not 'for what do I love thee?'
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Post by: Fulani Poet on July 05, 2006, 11:33:32 AM
Jim Reeves sang a song titled 'I love you because..' and went on to list why he loved her!
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Post by: HUSNAA on July 05, 2006, 11:38:43 AM
Jeez I didnt know there were ppl left who liked Jim Reeves songs. Strictly not my cup of tea, but OK :D
I'm more into Fats Domino! Thanks to my dad!! :lol:  :lol:  :lol:
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Post by: kitkat on July 05, 2006, 04:14:34 PM
Fats Domino!!!! Pray tell how old are you husnaa??  This is getting confusing.....
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Post by: HUSNAA on July 05, 2006, 06:40:37 PM
Do I have to be old to like Fats Domino? :D !!
Dont you know its a cardinal rule that women NEVER reveal their age!!!! But I'm pretty sure I'm older than you :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:

PS I like classical music especially Mozart's concertos, so I guess that should make me over 200yrs old........
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Post by: Fulani Poet on July 06, 2006, 06:13:05 PM
Yes oh, HUSNAA, there are still some of us left! I am a die-hard fan of country music, cheesy or not! Ferlin Husky included!