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Title: Judgement Day
Post by: gogannaka on July 12, 2004, 06:06:09 PM
-The heart will thump
-The body will shiver
-The eyes will bulge
-The ears will stretch
-The pores will sweat
-The brain will burn
-Under the scorching sun
Today there will be
-No father no son
-No daughter no mom
-No money no fame
-No answer when asked
-Who rules today
Today judgement will be made
-Known will be fate
-Left or right
-Green or Red
-Garden or heat
-Only deeds will reveal.
Title: Judgement Day
Post by: dan kauye on July 13, 2004, 08:15:59 PM
masha ALLAH goga,we need more of poems like dis infact i'm gon print it n paste it on ma bedroom wall so it serves as a reminder 4 me coz dis lyfe is fast becoming sumtin else,actually i ddnt know dat side of u (smyles).bravo!
Title: ya poem
Post by: mutuniyar on July 16, 2004, 03:50:04 PM
hmm.ka sani zan je Qur'an na duba ko zan sami inspiration for some really heart touching poems.not just heart touching but also heart girgiraryzin.dama na dade ban rubuta ba
Title: Re: ya poem
Post by: gogannaka on July 17, 2004, 02:09:36 PM
Quote from: "mutuniyar"hmm.ka sani zan je Qur'an na duba ko zan sami inspiration for some really heart touching poems.not just heart touching but also heart girgiraryzin.dama na dade ban rubuta ba

Thanx for the compliments dan kauye and Mutuniyar
To it says,ONLY your poems are allowed here mutuniyar.......

Amma dai duk da haka you are welcome to kanoonline...........Sai ki tattaro wadannan poems din da kika rubuta kika ajiye...mu kuma muyi ta karantawa....lol
Title: Judgement Day
Post by: Maleeq on July 19, 2004, 09:44:41 PM
damn! this some reel absorbing poem,i lyke it a lot.
da kinna thangs that make peeps reflect on life and see the true essence of it.
Title: Judgement Day
Post by: Fateez on July 22, 2004, 05:46:41 AM
nice one, gogannaka

May Allah guide us 2 da right path
Title: Judgement Day
Post by: Fulanizzle on July 23, 2004, 12:28:55 PM
salam..............whoa....that was nıce
Title: Judgement Day
Post by: gogannaka on July 23, 2004, 02:45:26 PM
Thank you ms fateez (fatzee) and fulanizzle
Title: Judgement Day
Post by: Ibro2g on July 26, 2004, 11:45:40 PM
The words from the great man.....this is too good, I love u man keep it up
Title: Judgement Day
Post by: gogannaka on July 29, 2004, 08:29:35 PM
Thanx ibro and Maleeq(nice name)
Title: Judgement Day
Post by: Fateez on July 31, 2004, 05:43:21 PM
Quote from: "gogannaka"Thank you ms fateez (fatzee) and fulanizzle


Mi is not Fatzee!! Gogannaka u r finding ma trouble!
Title: Judgement Day
Post by: Ibro2g on August 17, 2004, 12:22:28 AM
This bit of mistake somepeople cant even forgive....anyways this is judgement day huh goggs? HMMM Maybe we aught to read thru again huh?
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