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Title: MY QUEEN
Post by: amsaeedzrx on August 07, 2004, 05:39:37 PM
The more you take excuse
The more I get confuse

Your dazzling attitudes generates
The greatest vision that that migrates

You opt a little high pride
Not knowing that you'll be a bride

Think not with nostalgia
You'll always move with regalia

Decorated with adorable lilacs
Accompanied by assorted cadillacs

Envy not my glaring queen
She is always the reigning queen.
Title: MY QUEEN
Post by: Ibro2g on August 17, 2004, 12:10:31 AM
Mazzzaaaaaaaaa!There is a new guy in town and I have a feeling this guy is out for the trophy, wtch out tata!
Welkom Amsaeed...u will have a lovly stay here as a poet obviosly...
Title: RE: MY QUEEN
Post by: amsaeedzrx on August 25, 2004, 06:45:48 PM
Ha! Ha!! Ha!!!  :lol:

Nagode Ibro2g!

In fact, It seemed as if we are at the same direction. But if you could remember  your more exciting poems are more worth commending. However, we are goingalong the way and we shall maintain the "TEMPO"

Hi!!!
Title: MY QUEEN
Post by: Anonymous on April 26, 2005, 07:53:42 AM
Ibro2g I agree with your words.
Title: MY QUEEN
Post by: Fulani Poet on July 08, 2006, 01:38:19 AM
Great attempt. Seems to me like the rhymes are contrived.