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Member Showcase => Member Poetry => Topic started by: sadiq on December 18, 2004, 12:47:26 PM

Title: THE DIFFERENCE.
Post by: sadiq on December 18, 2004, 12:47:26 PM
THE DIFFERENCE :
I got up early one morning,
And rushed night into the day;
I had so much to accomplish,
That I didn?t have time to pray.


Problems just tumbled about me,
And heavier came each task,
?Why doesn?t God help me?? I wondered,
Then I remembered, ?I didn?t  ask?.


I wanted to see joy and beauty,
But the day toiled in grey and bleak;
I wondered why God didn?t show me,
Then I remembered, ?I didn?t seek?.


I tried to get into God?s presence;
I used all my keys at lock,
Then I remembered, ?I didn?t knock?.


I woke up early this morning,
And paused before entering the day;
I had so much to accomplish,
That I had to take time to pray.
Title: THE DIFFERENCE.
Post by: Nuruddeen on December 18, 2004, 01:17:08 PM
This is really interesting eventhough am not a poet. Keep it up
Title: THE DIFFERENCE.
Post by: Anonymous on December 19, 2004, 04:07:56 PM
I saw this poem in one website written by a Canadian woman years back. Or is this Sadiq a canadian woman?
Title: THE DIFFERENCE.
Post by: sadiq on December 21, 2004, 12:58:06 PM
Quote from: "Anonymous"I saw this poem in one website written by a Canadian woman years back. Or is this Sadiq a canadian woman?

My dear Guest,thanks a lot 4 ur good observation.But do find out if it was really a woman.
Title: THE DIFFERENCE.
Post by: elgaazus on December 21, 2004, 07:24:39 PM
Hello,

Sadiq you seem not to be defending yourself, do you accept being unoriginal as Guest observed. If yes then i will just accept that you only mean to share the poem with us and not Plagiarising :?