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Title: THE NAME.
Post by: sadiq on December 28, 2004, 10:59:37 AM
The first time I heard it;
I thought the whole day.
"Ramlah" she said the name;
That made my heart unsteady;
It got  so heavy;
I feared it might drop into my belly.


For the first time a name had struck me.
Is it because she is a lady?
Hormone, Chemistry, whatever you call it;
The fact still remains...
The name did it all!!
Title: THE NAME.
Post by: elgaazus on December 28, 2004, 07:31:44 PM
Wow, sadiq you really did wonderfully on your debut. it really sounds like a rap poem, for its full of rhymes. Keep it up.