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Title: ONE DIFFERENT WORLDS
Post by: bobboss on December 28, 2004, 10:11:42 PM
One Different Worlds

You and I are like the pages of a bound book
Dwelling within my heart  
Each page holds its secret
You are like the sun and the moon
So alike in purpose
But a world apart

You and I are like the brain and the mind
In control of the entire body
But a world apart
With different perspectives
How do I unravel the mystery of your heart
How do I merge this gulf between us
How do I understand this difference between us
Surely with a strong love
We can overcome all
Can't we?
Title: ONE DIFFERENT WORLDS
Post by: elgaazus on December 29, 2004, 07:21:08 PM
bobboss,
     This is really an imaginative piece, you seem to have a poet in you. With little polishing you will work wonders. Keep it up.