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Title: TWO WEEKS MORE
Post by: HUSNAA on June 15, 2007, 07:19:20 AM

Only two weeks more
and u will be gone
Wont see
wont hear
wont talk
maybe forevermore
except thro electrical signals
that send shock waves to my heart
whenever u come online.

Title: Re: TWO WEEKS MORE
Post by: gogannaka on June 28, 2007, 10:05:45 PM

Touching.
To miss someone gives me pleasure.
Painful pleasure.

Title: Re: TWO WEEKS MORE
Post by: Ibro2g on June 29, 2007, 03:01:33 PM

Intimate... through distance it travels
`our concerns and feelings
for here together we care
over pulses of u and I

nice piece Husnaa!

Title: Re: TWO WEEKS MORE
Post by: babushe on October 22, 2009, 06:58:42 PM

THE PULSE really shocks. CRISP and clear , simple but not simplistic. Good.

Title: Re: TWO WEEKS MORE
Post by: Jibo on October 23, 2009, 11:31:18 AM

Yah this extra-territorial communication nand the forevermore thing is seriously transcending human conception. It is exceptionally exceptionally extra -territorial! ::) ::) ::)

Title: Re: TWO WEEKS MORE
Post by: Muhsin on October 23, 2009, 01:27:44 PM

Quote from: HUSNAA on June 15, 2007, 07:19:20 AM
Only two weeks more
and u will be gone
Wont see
wont hear
wont talk
maybe forevermore
except thro electrical signals
that send shock waves to my heart
whenever u come online.

Auntie Husnaa, where are you, please? :'( :'( :'(

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