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Title: The Tragedy
Post by: Braveheart on March 13, 2004, 04:38:57 PM

Here I am lying in my bed feeling being humiliated and in distress

All because I feel all the people and the world are against me

I wonder whatever, however or wherever I go wrong

I do things against my wishes to impress people around me

But all in vain,

I never do things the way I always want to avoid false accusations

But all in vain

At times I wonder who really I am deep inside, because I keep changing dynamically just to impress people

But all in vain

When I frown my face and tent not to smile just to avoid negative impression from people all in vain

I tend not to make friends and live my life alone

But all is in vain

At times people do think that I am bad; some even think that I am crazy

Oh! God am in a state of confusion and highly disoriented  

I have lost my sense of direction

I cried to God help me! Out am I good or bad?

Oh! I feel being dejected and rejected by the whole world

Oh! Why is the world against me did I do something wrong to deserve this torment?

Title: The Tragedy
Post by: Anonymous on May 10, 2005, 07:54:14 AM

Braveheart I definitely agree with yor argument.

Title: The Tragedy
Post by: elgaazus on May 21, 2005, 05:19:03 PM

Braveheart,
its a nice poem you've written but if its really an expression of your feeling then my advice is just forget about what people say. For what ever you do people always talk. Like Danmaraya rightly put it 'dan Adam mai wuyan gane hali' ne, just follow your conscience and keep your cool.

Guest what do you mean you agree............... Or you are suffering the same 'self imposed predicament' too, cos that how i see it.

May God continue to guide us. SHALOM

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Post by: Ibro2g on June 09, 2005, 01:28:52 PM

Quote from: "elgaazus"

Guest what do you mean you agree............... Or you are suffering the same 'self imposed predicament' too, cos that how i see it.

Hahaa!... Anyways, more greese to ya elbow brave heart, or at least da name says it all.

Title: The Tragedy
Post by: mlbash on August 29, 2005, 06:28:57 PM

THAT WAS ACOOL ONE BRAVEHEART, KEEP IT UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP :lol:

Title: The Tragedy
Post by: Maleeq on October 27, 2005, 05:41:21 PM

i lyk da thut behind ur poem,at least it justifys ur name "braveheart".but i guess u hav 2 work on ur presentation.cuz it got mi thinkin lyk i waz readin an essay 4rm a newspapa or sumtin,but anywayz deres alwayz a startin point so neva luk bak.

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