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Title: CHAINED
Post by: Fulanizzle on November 13, 2003, 10:58:47 PM
I stand back and watch the air that i breathe pass me by

I quietly inhale his presence

But in absolute and complete silence


How I long to exhale my feelings towards you
How I long to break free from this cage of shyness
Where my own feelings are chained in my heart
....Unable to leak out in your presence
The cage where my words are tied to my tongue
.....Restricted to not utter a word to you
The cage where my touch is banished from my hands
..When I try to reach out and hold u to show u affection
The cage where my desperate glance is imprisoned in my eyes
....and I am not able to look interested in you

So forever you will remain encrypted in my heart
If you never get to read this....i guess you will never know
That it is you that my helpless soul wails for
That it is you I am badly dying for
That it is you I Want so very near
That it is you who makes everything crystal clear
That it is you who makes magic so real
That it is you, your heart i must somehow steal

If our match are constullated in the velvet skies
If true love has our souls woven in its lustre silk thread
If ?destiny has our future painted in the same color

Then I truely believe sometime,
? ? ? I truely believe somewhere,
? ? ? I truely believe Somehow...........
........Our love shall truely be


?**** ? **** ? **** ? ?**** ?****
Title: Re: CHAINED
Post by: Waziri on November 14, 2003, 01:26:38 PM
Wao!!!!

Gud gal, dis 1 sounds so real and true like the existence of good God. Why won't you just act. I really can feel it deep inside me. It is for real and real.

Bravo!!

It reads like Richard Lovelace's : To Althea From Prison

Hey, gud gal, ur poetry matches those of the Victorians both in wit and diction. You are the POET OF THE MONTH!!!!!!
Title: Re: CHAINED
Post by: Waziri on November 14, 2003, 01:29:34 PM
Gud gal permit me to print this, There are some friends that are not online that I know will enjoy it.

Granted?
Title: Re: CHAINED
Post by: Fulanizzle on November 18, 2003, 03:23:42 PM
thanx bro..
4sho! u can print it!
much luv
Title: Re: CHAINED
Post by: gogannaka on November 20, 2003, 01:05:21 AM
QuoteGud gal permit me to print this, There are some friends that are not online that I know will enjoy it.

Granted?

That'll attract some copyright charges man ::)
Title: Re: CHAINED
Post by: Waziri on November 26, 2003, 08:32:11 PM
Ok gud gal, thank once more

much luv

Gogannaka,

I think I already have COpyleft.... while she keeps the copyright
Title: Re: CHAINED
Post by: Ibro2g on December 12, 2003, 03:15:46 AM
Kai, Ina ga Goggs baka da labarin Waziri professor din Exglish ne ba ko?
 Wonderful piece my dear, its faith...rather its destiny. And r destined to him the right person Insha Allah.