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Title: Memories
Post by: Waziri on November 03, 2003, 12:51:52 PM
(For those friends, partners and relatives, that assist one another with smiles and kind words, they appreciate one another virtues, respect opinions and over look weaknesses. Them iI applaud as I celebrate m one-year-older-than-my-age)

They call those tunes
That make me dance
They pursue those dreams
That make me sour

Me - mo - ries

They track my hopes
They make me frail
They hold those ends
They make me fall

Me - mo - ries

On placid pearls
They build their pride
With diamond chains
Of golden rings
At wish they please
They knot my glees

Me-mo-ries

You form my lyrics
You design my tone

Me-mo-ries

At your feet I bend
On knees I cruise
At your dub I die
Or I rise lively
In bows I call your names
Countless

Me-mo-ries

Let love be come in thy good calls
Let life spring from thy bleak fears
Me-mo-rieees
Title: Re: Memories
Post by: kilishi on November 03, 2003, 02:32:24 PM
Waziri ur poems are so emotional,i like the way u compose ur poems,may be i will try and get a clue from u.
Title: Re: Memories
Post by: Waziri on November 03, 2003, 02:47:00 PM
Kilishi thank you 4 d compliments, I feel flattered ::).

Errrr... I think my writings are an extention of my personality. You read me carefully, you perceive  d way my heart works.

I guess... Kilishi, I am d emotional type.

And my definition of poetry  goes like this:

Graphical representation of emotions using words.
Title: Re: Memories
Post by: Fulanizzle on November 03, 2003, 09:20:42 PM
A MASSIVE CUM BACK!!! ONCE AGAIN A JOB VERY WELDONE!!!!!! IT DOES GIVE A RING TO THE HEART!!! EXCELLENT!
Title: Re: Memories
Post by: Ibro2g on November 12, 2003, 01:11:22 PM
The legendary waziri is back with the best...what can I say...
Title: Re: Memories
Post by: Waziri on November 26, 2003, 08:32:39 PM
thanks, ma gud ppl
Title: Memories
Post by: Fulani Poet on July 13, 2006, 12:47:20 PM
The repetition of 'me-mo-ries' emphasises your message very well. Good work!