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Title: First Love
Post by: aliyuhydar on January 23, 2003, 08:32:46 AM
First love,for   mother,my home is my mother,my home is where she is,i belong to where she belong,ifreely move,when she freely moves,No mount of treasure can subtitute her,No provision of luxury can take her place inme,she is my first love forever she remains One.
Title: Re: First Love
Post by: ummita on January 24, 2003, 02:47:29 PM
Mhmmm............sounds ok......Iz all gud....pretty gud......keep blazin!!!!
Title: Re: First Love
Post by: Maleeq on January 25, 2003, 01:37:52 AM
quite simple and moving,Aliyu kayi kokari
Title: Re: First Love
Post by: Blaqueen on January 27, 2003, 04:26:57 AM
QuoteFirst love,for ? mother,my home is my mother,my home is where she is,i belong to where she belong,ifreely move,when she freely moves,No mount of treasure can subtitute her,No provision of luxury can take her place inme,she is my first love forever she remains One.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... FAB!!!
Title: Re: First Love
Post by: Fulanizzle on February 01, 2003, 01:35:40 AM
sweeeeet