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Title: Everyday I love you
Post by: Ibro2g on December 02, 2002, 02:57:37 AM
I have been through many tests,
I have come to know you best,
I have dreamt of nothing else,
and my heart will never rest
you know you rise at my east
everyday I love you.

I think I found something new
You make my sky so blue
and you don't have a clue
I'm stuck to you like glue
you know I have that love flu
everyday I love you

It's like an egg about to hatch
It's like soldiers set to match
The sensation of your touch
I ask of it my soul to patch
you know I love you very much
everyday I love you
Title: Re: Everyday I love you
Post by: Aydee Fella on December 10, 2002, 02:16:55 AM
man where and how do u get these?????????????? :-/
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Post by: Dafgons on December 13, 2002, 07:11:00 AM
Bobo take it easy mana

                 Dafgons
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Post by: Fulanizzle on December 13, 2002, 11:01:30 AM
AAAAAAAAAw  Good fella u gatta admit that was one tight group of  words all put beautifully together!
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Post by: Aydee Fella on December 16, 2002, 04:17:14 AM
Ibro is this about someone or juss one yur numerous crazy :D poems.
Title: Re: Everyday I love you
Post by: Ibro2g on December 20, 2002, 12:55:02 AM
thanks alot folks, Aydee remember when u think I think alot, this is just the aftermath. and .... you should know better I`m outta all that, she does`nt exist, anyways she is virtually a combination of ten gurls I really like alot. howz that.
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Post by: Aydee Fella on December 20, 2002, 03:09:55 AM
Allah! Mallam, kai de....i dey come tommorrow Insha Allah ill c ya.
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Post by: Ibro2g on December 26, 2002, 04:16:59 AM
Thank God you did. Anyways you know this is like my best peace of poetry ever. I just love it. 8)
Title: Everyday I love you
Post by: sadiq_ahmed on April 14, 2004, 01:31:01 PM
Ibro that's nice keep it up it's intresting , ihope it is not an opportunity to all our with thise ur poems :D
Title: Everyday I love you
Post by: Ibro2g on July 27, 2004, 12:27:14 AM
you just gotta be who u gotta be sadeeq, ur a fine writer, `n I intend to look at u as such. u already look better!
Title: RE: everyday I love you
Post by: amsaeedzrx on August 07, 2004, 05:22:44 PM
Well Done Ibro2g

Your poem seemed to be a masterpiece, however, there is the need for you to to fragment your verses just to add more exotic rhythms to the ones you've used.

Nagode maka! I like your style and I hope you can still send more.
Title: Everyday I love you
Post by: Maleeq on August 17, 2004, 11:31:18 AM
damn nigga u on some tyte shit level!!! nywayz da poem is really nice but i think its abit short or wat u think?
Title: Everyday I love you
Post by: precious on November 11, 2004, 12:21:02 PM
I like this poem.kamar an dan duba zuciya ta :lol: