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Title: If only she knew...
Post by: Fulanizzle on November 06, 2002, 11:35:27 AM
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IF ONLY SHE KNEW....

The feeling was so strong
It didn't seem at all wrong
Was it really love
Or was it just lust
Tangled in temptation
Heart beating fast in desperation
If only Mary knew what she knows now
She lost everything she onced had
Her pride, dignity...she must have been mad
Above all, the man she loves
Now it is not her he is thinking of
He found himself another girl
Who guarded herself like a pearl
Mary finds herself all alone
She feels her heart is set and stoned
Her face buried in her palms with shame
Now she has a child alone to tame
Had she known what she knows know
If only she knew what she knows now... ?
Title: Re: If only she knew...
Post by: Blaqueen on November 14, 2002, 01:00:46 PM
nice poem.. very nice!!!

but why did u specifically choose the name mary?
Title: Re: If only she knew...
Post by: Fulanizzle on November 16, 2002, 10:37:29 PM
   
Salamu alaiki  dyme
I knew a messed up lady, called Mary... and had similar experiences as the "Mary" in my poem...so.... and...thats why....
Title: Re: If only she knew...
Post by: Ibro2g on November 20, 2002, 01:55:54 PM
I gotta be honest wid u feesha I envy yah. This are one of the finest ,asterpieces I have ever heard. Ur going to da top.
Title: Re: If only she knew...
Post by: Fulanizzle on November 20, 2002, 02:45:29 PM
   
  ;D ;D;D thanx  but i come many steps after u
Title: Re: If only she knew...
Post by: Anonymous on November 21, 2002, 01:31:52 AM
nice poem fulanicious, :D
u r almost going to da top gurl 8)
keep it up
Title: Re: If only she knew...
Post by: Fulanizzle on November 24, 2002, 09:31:37 PM
   LOL  brother thanx.....well as a moderator of this section gaba daya...I am not taking part in the competition....I am leaving it for you guys to enjoy it :D ;) :-*
Title: Re: If only she knew...
Post by: aliyuhydar on November 25, 2002, 02:35:13 AM
very good poem . but why da name MARY.
Title: Re: If only she knew...
Post by: Fulanizzle on November 26, 2002, 10:36:26 AM
lol @ aliyuhydar.... dyme asked the same question...below, i quoted the the reply i gave her....stay safe bro, n thanx for the comment! u got fantastic poems too!
salam


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Salamu alaiki  dyme
I knew a messed up lady, called Mary... and had similar experiences as the "Mary" in my poem...so.... and...thats why....