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Title: Oh! damsel in distress
Post by: Maleeq on November 28, 2006, 07:33:39 PM
Oh! damsel in distress
What ails thee?
What makes the soft radiant glow
Abandon thy face?
I gaze at you
Alone, save for you
In seldom speech
Inviting none but malaria
With the sun
Long dead
In it's place
The negro sky
Oh! damsel in distress...
Title: Oh! damsel in distress
Post by: Hussain on November 28, 2006, 08:28:05 PM
mayn,i wonder where u get ur inspirations.keep it up
Title: Oh! damsel in distress
Post by: Fulani Poet on December 10, 2006, 05:09:55 PM
There is something alluring about a 'damsel in distress!' I guess this what Maleeq is trying to portray.
Title: Re: Oh! damsel in distress
Post by: Ibro2g on June 03, 2007, 05:41:07 PM
Oh Protector thy prey to ye
Save this child from cunning words
invite him to lighten up poetry
for thou place, where the best men art
is inspiration Inc. uncompromised