Imaginary

[Ibro2g]

Imaginary![/b]

Walking about realms through open doors,
I arrived one shut with a certain force,
so much, no mortal power can get across.
Suddenly I awake, nightmare or a living curse?
I set to verify where I am, about which course,
Set to understand what we do and what it does,
the paths we take and taken and for what cause?
Certainty and uncertainty, I thought is a source.
uncertainty of our life, future, and our laws.
certainty of death, faith and destiny, mine and yours.
My dream, my reality, I dont know which of worlds.
Ofcourse! imagination and reality are reversed.
Our paths are blurry for uncertainty we nurse,
So our slowly amputating spirit now roars
at the fury of its temple consumed in sores.
From the begining to the end of lifes own tours
In every attempt of humanity to get the scores
The rage of fleshy and sore temples burse,
driving brilliance to insanity, into wars.
What thought could take a mind so disperse?
I set again, to think of the worse,
and I rehearse.
But reality struck this imaginary verse,
right here, at my dying imaginary voice.

[elgaaz]

its a nice piece you've got Ibo2g, i will say its quite imaginative as the title implies. and the rhyming at the ends of the verses is on line ( hope u understand). But why not try imagining nature and the way it works, i mean living. it will make for a title emmmmmmmmm..... like imagining life. well, just posting ma suggest and i think its needed to improve poetry on this site.

[Ibro2g]

well elgaaz, this is an imagination of life...or probably its reality. I see

our every values to be so uncertain and unpredictable. We have zero assurances of

the very things we believe are real. And what we believe to be imaginative is what

comes to be...so certainly, so religiously, very much solid. What else could be so

imaginative of the nature of life? everything wid a begining has to have an end but

nice suggestions anyways and like u said, it is needed!

[Fulanizzle]

ibroooooooooooooooooooo  

tyt  like whoa

[Hafsy_Lady]

BERRI-FU...............MHMMM MAKE I SHARPEN MY PENSU I WILL START WRITING POETRY. WHAT DO YOU THINK FULANIZZLE? :wink:   AND POETRY PERFECTORS IBRO,ABDULGEE & D REST? MAKE I START ABI?

[dan kauye]

gaskia fa ana bajakolin talent a wannan wuri,this is really off d heezy 4 sheezy! boi u kool,sounds like we gat tight poets in here..guys u all gr8..keep up & stay real.

[Ibro2g]

Hafsy Poetry is all about self expression, ya gat it all. I'm waiting 4 ur first piece...or probably one of ur pieces! and thanks Dan Kauye, thank God 4 fulanicious this place is raving 4 hot talents.