Everyday I love you

Started by Ibro2g, December 02, 2002, 02:57:37 AM

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Ibro2g

I have been through many tests,
I have come to know you best,
I have dreamt of nothing else,
and my heart will never rest
you know you rise at my east
everyday I love you.

I think I found something new
You make my sky so blue
and you don't have a clue
I'm stuck to you like glue
you know I have that love flu
everyday I love you

It's like an egg about to hatch
It's like soldiers set to match
The sensation of your touch
I ask of it my soul to patch
you know I love you very much
everyday I love you
Safety and Peace

Aydee Fella

man where and how do u get these?????????????? :-/
never rat out yur friends n alwaiz keep yur mouth shut"

Dafgons

Bobo take it easy mana

                 Dafgons
ATCHU WANT???????????????????????

Fulanizzle

AAAAAAAAAw  Good fella u gatta admit that was one tight group of  words all put beautifully together!
)

Aydee Fella

Ibro is this about someone or juss one yur numerous crazy :D poems.
never rat out yur friends n alwaiz keep yur mouth shut"

Ibro2g

thanks alot folks, Aydee remember when u think I think alot, this is just the aftermath. and .... you should know better I`m outta all that, she does`nt exist, anyways she is virtually a combination of ten gurls I really like alot. howz that.
Safety and Peace

Aydee Fella

Allah! Mallam, kai de....i dey come tommorrow Insha Allah ill c ya.
never rat out yur friends n alwaiz keep yur mouth shut"

Ibro2g

Thank God you did. Anyways you know this is like my best peace of poetry ever. I just love it. 8)
Safety and Peace

sadiq_ahmed

Ibro that's nice keep it up it's intresting , ihope it is not an opportunity to all our with thise ur poems :D

Ibro2g

you just gotta be who u gotta be sadeeq, ur a fine writer, `n I intend to look at u as such. u already look better!
Safety and Peace

amsaeedzrx

Well Done Ibro2g

Your poem seemed to be a masterpiece, however, there is the need for you to to fragment your verses just to add more exotic rhythms to the ones you've used.

Nagode maka! I like your style and I hope you can still send more.

Maleeq

damn nigga u on some tyte shit level!!! nywayz da poem is really nice but i think its abit short or wat u think?
akavelli da don till I`m gone!!!

precious

I like this poem.kamar an dan duba zuciya ta :lol: