THE NAME.

[sadiq]

The first time I heard it;
I thought the whole day.
"Ramlah" she said the name;
That made my heart unsteady;
It got  so heavy;
I feared it might drop into my belly.


For the first time a name had struck me.
Is it because she is a lady?
Hormone, Chemistry, whatever you call it;
The fact still remains...
The name did it all!!

[elgaazus]

Wow, sadiq you really did wonderfully on your debut. it really sounds like a rap poem, for its full of rhymes. Keep it up.