Mother Care

Started by elgaazus, December 13, 2004, 07:27:28 PM

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elgaazus

Never was precedence ever more fair
Than to every child it gave a mother's care

When an infant she shrouds it with loving embrace
Growing up couldn't hinder her loving grace

With passing days a show of compassion
Grooming an adult full of love and emotion

Could any love match a mother's care
A pure love, mighty and never wares
orget about it

ummita

I neva had an interest or passion 4 poem writin.....but I seriously admire those who do.....shows raw talent, creativeness & d beauty of such words is very intriguin & movin........all shows d quality poem writaz posses!

Elgaazus, dis poem makes me miss ma mamma n makes me wanna go search 4 her, grab her & hug her real tyt.........(I luv dhat woman......)

Ur poem is absolutely sweet.......n d most amusin thing is "How short, yet it carrys such great weight"! Na dis wat I call a poem.......*thumbs up*
Despite ur slammin, am still jammin!!!

elgaazus

well, Ummita thanx for the compliment but i so much beleive that nothing could pay for having a Mother and this was just an effort to show appreciation. ' Rabbi irhamhumah kama rabba ya'ani sagira'. Amin
orget about it