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"mama's just a little girl'
« on: August 25, 2003, 07:57:48 AM »
::)at 16 what a beautiful thing
The very essence of a jet black ebony queen
And who could tell she get  pregant at an early age
she did't listen had sex
watch her belly raise
Got  violated by someone she dated
if this is fate  i hate to see the seed she created  
so we wate,though it takes time to buld the body and  the mind
she reclines 9 months
Then finally its time
What do we find ?
A little grown boy a mind  with a tortured soul
Addicted to a life of crime at no time of the growing stage
He learnd his values on the streets at an early age
Watch for police
dont  come home
"coz mammas  acting crazy"mama's just  a little girl       
till ballin till da day i die..............

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Re: "mama's just a little girl'
« Reply #1 on: August 25, 2003, 08:24:09 PM »
Nice one,but i think is supose to be at the poetry sesseion, am i right??/ ???
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Re: "mama's just a little girl'
« Reply #2 on: August 25, 2003, 08:25:48 PM »
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Nice one,but i think is supose to be at the poetry sesseion, am i right??/ ???


sorry i mean section
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Re: "mama's just a little girl'
« Reply #3 on: August 26, 2003, 01:33:03 AM »
That was kool but I think u should credit the really poet at the end i.e 2Pac
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Re: "mama's just a little girl'
« Reply #4 on: August 26, 2003, 05:45:10 AM »
:Pif i wanted to post it at da poet sectoin iwhould have done so'pleasssssssssss..........and as for u venom ta its pac that wrote it so wats urs u got beef............. ::)write urs
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Re: "mama's just a little girl'
« Reply #5 on: August 26, 2003, 03:07:38 PM »
Moha I do not have any beef with u my point is if u wont 2 quote some1elses work thats fine but at the end u should write the name of the person who wrote that poem if not thats plagiarism. ?
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Re: "mama's just a little girl'
« Reply #6 on: August 26, 2003, 03:23:47 PM »
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:Pif i wanted to post it at da poet sectoin iwhould have done so'pleasssssssssss..........and as for u venom ta its pac that wrote it so wats urs u got beef............. ::)write urs

No be fight owwwww ::) ::) ::)
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Re: "mama's just a little girl'
« Reply #7 on: September 02, 2003, 02:22:20 AM »
I'm sorry coz what I have to say has nothing to do wid the topic.
But:
Gogannaka, Kilishi and Saurayi, I thank you and I like the way you keep this site going!, I mean I see all the good jobs u guyzes have been on, ,plus ummitah,  u too,  u hanged on even when I thought....ahhh neva mind, I'll try and stick on and catch up. But amust promise u, da tyme iz coming when yo`ll gon get tired of mah posts.!
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Re: "mama's just a little girl'
« Reply #8 on: September 02, 2003, 02:25:29 AM »
Oh no
I didnt mean to post this here. and plz be sincere wid urselves, venom isonly trying to note that to ya, I think if it is pacs song, then pac deserve the credit, try to find the poet in u, brings much joy. read mah post poetry
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Re: "mama's just a little girl'
« Reply #9 on: September 02, 2003, 10:11:42 PM »
MOHA & VENOM Maintain! Maintain!!!! A kama kai!!!!!!! (Catch Head  abeg)!!!!! No beefs........it duznt matta... Anybody can write wat they feel lyk!!!..........PEACE BROTHERZ!!!
Despite ur slammin, am still jammin!!!

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Re: "mama's just a little girl'
« Reply #10 on: September 03, 2003, 07:07:37 PM »
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... Anybody can write wat they feel lyk!!!..........PEACE BROTHERZ!!![/qoute]


Yes but in a right place pluuzzzz[let me use it once] 8) 8)
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