My Wife

[elgaaz]

Adoring sweet she's always been
A rare gem rediating joy
Freeing despair from my very mind
Her sight has been my antidote
To all my stress incured at work

A smiley face like daily sun
Sweet words she only utters
A comforting partner like nothing better
In home keeping i always wonder
is she an angel that never falters?

Her beauty is one not to mention
My eyes have sighted nothing better
I pray she knows i will never loose her
Cos she is a wife every man desires

Having her by me i am the most envied
for my life with her never lacked happiness
Thought of her i always cherish
My wife you should know i will always luv u.

[Ibro2g]

What sweet thing, a merry she must be. Wish she could be here to read it!

[elgaazus]

Ibro2g,

Like i anticipated you are the first to post a comment to this my novice's poem. You are doing a good work in encouraging poetry on this site keep it up.  

pls, help me talk to admin. What is it i've done wrong that i have registered to kanoonline but am denied membership. I am still awaiting my comfirmation notice in my email box. Must i wait a lifetime.

[Ibro2g]

Elgazz, I'm sure there is a problem or so, and if the admin wa aware he woulda done som`n bout it, or he probably is doin. He is someone who doesnt sleep at it. Take this complaint to the general board, or post him and see! and thanks yet I think its a collective credit, keep it up!

[elgaazus]

Ibro2g,

Alhamdullilah! I just regitered with a new name, its good to belong. Thanks

[precious]

How come i didnt read this poem b4 today.Absolutely wonderful.
Somehow I would like to be that kinda wife.
Or maybe that is me ma sef.It would be my descirption one of these days. :lol:

[elgaazus]

Precious, it could be possible cos am still SSS!!!!!! but only that you have to deserve it.  :D