TWO WEEKS MORE

[HUSNAA]

Only two weeks more
and u will be gone
Wont see
wont hear
wont talk
maybe forevermore
except thro electrical signals
that send shock waves to my heart
whenever u come online.

[gogannaka]

Touching.
To miss someone gives me pleasure.
Painful pleasure.

[Ibro2g]

Intimate... through distance it travels
              `our concerns and feelings
               for here together we care
               over pulses of u and I

nice piece Husnaa!

[babushe]

THE PULSE really shocks. CRISP and clear , simple but not simplistic. Good.

[Jibo]

Yah this extra-territorial communication nand the forevermore thing is seriously transcending human conception. It is exceptionally exceptionally extra -territorial! ::) ::) ::)

[Muhsin]

Only two weeks more
and u will be gone
Wont see
wont hear
wont talk
maybe forevermore
except thro electrical signals
that send shock waves to my heart
whenever u come online.

Auntie Husnaa, where are you, please? :'( :'( :'(