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Re: This Pretty Face
« Reply #15 on: September 12, 2008, 08:38:26 PM »
Two days remaining!!!!!
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Re: This Pretty Face
« Reply #16 on: September 13, 2008, 04:18:27 PM »
Haba GGNK,
You are too nice (:P) on Muhsin. With this long Koboko, what do you expect from Muhsin?

DB,
Kar ka damu, if you are as patient as vulture, you will get what you want to know; but don't be like the hawk, who is impatient and would get at his prey with might; he ended up in a trap and at the end, it was the vulture's day. 8)

Muhsin,
Let's start a story like I suggested.

'There is a man who wants to marry a pretty girl, double edged educated and a practical muslim. He is .... (Ok Muhsin, you are good at telling stories, describe the man, so that we can build a good Character of the man). Most of his friends are aware of his quest for a decent girl, but they think the type of girl he wants as a wife is difficult to come-by.

One of his friends promises to introduce him to... (continue, please)
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Re: This Pretty Face
« Reply #17 on: September 14, 2008, 11:30:41 AM »
Jibo,
Do you really mean business? As I told you; writing a story is not that simple also. One needs to, for a succesful story, cracks his brain before he produce one.

Moreover, never mind these two fellows. Muma haka muke ta hakuri da su for time .immemorial'.
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Re: This Pretty Face
« Reply #18 on: September 14, 2008, 12:09:58 PM »
Kai Muhsinnnnn,

Ashe bada labari na da wuya? Na yi tsammanin ka ce abin da ka saba da shi kenan. Ni kam tuni na san rubutaccen labari na da wuya, Kai dai kana son kai engaging dina a wani philosophical discourse ne da ban shirya ba. Kuma na ba da kai don mu yi tare, yanzu ka zuke. Duk dai labarin na cikin wannan poem. Saboda haka ni da ba sababbe bane wajen bada labari, ya kamata ka taimakeni mu fito da labarin da ke cikin wannan batu.

Kar fa ka bari GGNK yayi maka dariya; dama ga shi ya baka aiki... kuma har da wata katuwar yizga yana kirga maka kwanaki.

Kai a dai a sha ruwa lafiya. Allah Ya sa asan wani wanda zai ci gaba da labarin, mu gani ko ma iya kaiwa karshe. ;D ;D ;D
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Re: This Pretty Face
« Reply #19 on: September 22, 2008, 10:26:40 AM »
Muhsin ya kasa.
Over to you Dan borno.
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Re: This Pretty Face
« Reply #20 on: September 25, 2008, 01:05:12 PM »
Two days remaining!!!!!


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Re: This Pretty Face
« Reply #21 on: September 25, 2008, 11:34:09 PM »
Very interesting thread. I am almost tempted to take up the challenge if muhsin wont....
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Re: This Pretty Face
« Reply #22 on: September 26, 2008, 08:54:41 AM »
Good Offer! There you are, Hussna.

I personally welcome your efforts. And I will give a full support. May be we would come up with a biyutiful story. Carry on!
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Re: This Pretty Face
« Reply #23 on: September 26, 2008, 04:09:20 PM »
Ok but I need to know the premise of the story. Your answers have been a bit vague when asked for the story behind the poem. To me the story behind the poem is rather like that film 'One moment in time' (I'd forgotten the name of the film) It stars Christopher Reeves and Jane Seymour. He saw her picture and fell in love with her. Unfortunately, the time the portrait was done was 1912 and he was living in 1972. So she was the age of his grandmother at the time he fell in love with her picture. So I feel u are maybe in a similar situation. You have fallen for the photo of someone who is much older than u and u wished it wasnt so. That is why the reference to time and aging process.
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Re: This Pretty Face
« Reply #24 on: September 26, 2008, 05:50:49 PM »
Very interesting thread. I am almost tempted to take up the challenge if muhsin wont....

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Re: This Pretty Face
« Reply #25 on: September 26, 2008, 08:23:46 PM »
Ok but I need to know the premise of the story. Your answers have been a bit vague when asked for the story behind the poem. To me the story behind the poem is rather like that film 'One moment in time' (I'd forgotten the name of the film) It stars Christopher Reeves and Jane Seymour. He saw her picture and fell in love with her. Unfortunately, the time the portrait was done was 1912 and he was living in 1972. So she was the age of his grandmother at the time he fell in love with her picture. So I feel u are maybe in a similar situation. You have fallen for the photo of someone who is much older than u and u wished it wasnt so. That is why the reference to time and aging process.

Well you may wish to start that way, but let us not personalise the experience. Let's create characters and assign roles to play, like I started previously.


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Muhsin kaima ka shigo, mai yiwuwa ka zama dan amshi, tunda kai kasa a gwiwa! ;)
A lazy youth is definitely a begging adult! Bata hankalin Dare ka yi suna!: Fas'alu ahalil zikri, inkuntum la ta'alamun!

 


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