Together Forever

straightalkin · July 27, 2004, 04:16:21 PM

i would have loved to be ur wife
i would have loved to have ur kids
but since this is where the road leads
i wish u well in ur endeavours in life

the force of love must yield to nature
but secrets shared remain concealed
though pain and sorrow will be discounted
and joyous moments forever remembered

and so i ask u to forget me not
for i take the pain to let u know
that the love i have for u endures

Ibro2g · July 28, 2004, 12:33:29 AM

What marvel
Something that expresses the mind of a hausa gurl lover who is obviosly getting married to another...the picture is sad but the expression is very much clear.

straightalkin · July 28, 2004, 02:52:59 PM

LOL not necessarily!

gogannaka · July 29, 2004, 08:23:08 PM

Nice one......(thumbs up)

straightalkin · July 30, 2004, 04:55:39 PM

Quote from: "gogannaka"Nice one......(thumbs up)

hmmmm blackmail works, doesnt it!!! lol

gogannaka · July 31, 2004, 05:25:28 PM

Quote from: "straightalkin"
Quote from: "gogannaka"Nice one......(thumbs up)

hmmmm blackmail works, doesnt it!!! lol

Mtssssss...........wicked

straightalkin · August 01, 2004, 08:48:35 PM

Quote from: "gogannaka"
Quote from: "straightalkin"
Quote from: "gogannaka"Nice one......(thumbs up)

hmmmm blackmail works, doesnt it!!! lol

Mtssssss...........wicked

:twisted:

Ibro2g · August 17, 2004, 12:28:38 AM

No Now Kids, it doesnt have to be this way!
Well str8talking, I think its a poem u can recite to any hausa gurl in love wid another person and gettin married to another...she'll put it in her head that instant. I so feel for em

elgaaz · October 12, 2004, 05:39:12 PM

Ibro2g, i think you will make a good reviewer cos you got straighttalkig right there...................................i begin to like this site.

ummita · October 13, 2004, 03:35:15 PM

AWWWWWWWW CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEE (she laffs)
Straighttlkin............am coming 4 poem lectures. I need me 2 start learning all theseeeeeee.

elgaaz · October 13, 2004, 07:50:45 PM

Quote from: "ummita"AWWWWWWWW CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEE (she laffs)
Straighttlkin............am coming 4 poem lectures. I need me 2 start learning all theseeeeeee.

its good to be a poet... you know what ummita? its not such a big deal all you gat to do is pick a pen when you got inspired by anything and just write. you will be surprise what a poet you may discover in yourself. though it will be nice to post it on this site for the straight talkins and ibro2g to offer you contructive criticism. That way you will keep improving. well...........................adieus.

elgaaz · October 13, 2004, 07:53:32 PM

Quote from: "ummita"AWWWWWWWW CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEE (she laffs)
Straighttlkin............am coming 4 poem lectures. I need me 2 start learning all theseeeeeee.

its good to be a poet... you know what ummita? its not such a big deal all you gat to do is pick a pen when you got inspired by anything and just write. you will be surprise what a poet you may discover in yourself. though it will be nice to post it on this site for the straight talkins and ibro2g to offer you contructive criticism. That way you will keep improving. well...........................adieus.

straightalkin · October 17, 2004, 11:09:14 PM

thanks for the compliment ummita though i dont think my poetic skills r that great! elgaaz u r right- all u have to do is pick up pen and write whats in ur head and then polish it up when u r done... :)

alhassan007 · October 20, 2004, 08:57:13 AM

[/quote] You know when i first joint this site as a lover of poems and a writer of one if given the opotunity i thought i will be far left behind but now i guest i thought was wrong cos i am now fast improving. Good work straightalkin, hoping to see more of them. :roll: