My treasure gone

Aydee Fella · November 26, 2002, 02:47:45 AM

I remember that mournful morningwhen death snatched Mum
I remember being torn by pain
It had neither a name nor an end
I remember now with a cracking heart echoes of our cries
and the cascade of tears .
They brought water to my throath,
but I said i asked not for it .
They brought a mat for me to relax my skeleton,
but I said I asked not for it .
They brought hankies to dry my discrete tears ,
but I said I asked not for it.
All i was thinking of was this monster that had gotten hold of man.
Intense is this wound that has no cure and promises not to heal
No boom can heal this loss
For all sincere healings non is like her
Smile Mama wherever you are
Cos yours was a life well spent
And worthy of echoing
Heaven knows you are for him.

Fulanizzle · November 26, 2002, 10:12:54 AM

ayyydeeee....
dont know what to sayyyy,
anywayz we will talk...
Shes in a much better place aydee, smile for that!
n keep ya head up!

Fulanizzle · November 26, 2002, 10:24:44 AM

ahhh that reminded me of my poem i wrote 'bout my grandfather :-[...  

Aydee, keep ur shyne on! that poem is just marvelous
Allah ya jikan dukan Muslimai...Insha Allah....ameen

Ibro2g · November 26, 2002, 06:43:45 PM

Allah ya jikan ta, da shi da dukkan musulmi, and aydee I always wanned to tell you this, you should be proud of who she was since eventually everyone will go, she was a figure I myself is proud to be part of. smile for that man.

Blaqueen · November 27, 2002, 10:56:33 AM

:'( AD.... that was excellent... i actually cried!.. everyone's final destination is to the Lord... Allah ya jikan ta... and we'll all pray for her...
Allah ya bata haskan kabari, Allah ya sa er aljanna che... Allah ya sa ta huta... And may Allah guide u to follow in her footsteps, i know she touched the hearts of many... and she'll always be remembered...
I bet she's proud of u... so keep ya head up and keep makin' her proud... @>-

Aydee Fella · November 28, 2002, 05:29:11 PM

Thanks guys

MohammedIbrahim · November 30, 2002, 06:55:44 AM

Thats..........................I'm............kinna short of words.....

Blaqueen · November 30, 2002, 02:54:49 PM

*smile* action speaks louder than words...

Aydee Fella · November 30, 2002, 05:59:06 PM

U know thats life 4 you ,cos u mighht not have everything da way u want it .

Aydee Fella · November 30, 2002, 06:00:50 PM

And Ibro plz change that Buggsy cos theres only one me around here

Blaqueen · November 30, 2002, 10:30:34 PM

this poem still gives meeh goosebumps... it has my 5000 votes!