Ripples

[Ibro2g]

By a single touch,
power is unleashed
From the simple ripples,
to the great tidal waves
No limit to its travel,
niether to its strenght
Men are ripples,
simple and unpredictable
To all other creations,
far beyond contestations
Indeed, this is a gift,
and another of choice
We are to choose,
creative or distructive
The choice is left for you!

[Ibro2g]

guyz this is mah first poem...without rhymes that is. Does it work? I mean is it good?

[Maleeq]

yah i chose to be creative a long tyme ago...very long tyme ago.
     and lemmi tellu your poem is quite nice but the best thang iz that it's  so meaningful.......so man shrug any attempt by anyone here or anywhere to bring yuwa tempo down.keep up wit yuwa non rhyming poems and see

[Ibro2g]

thanks alot man. I`ll try

[Fulanizzle]

nice Ibro2g...

amma kayi impressin ina sosai

[Ibro2g]

I`m sooooooooooooooooooo glad to know that