MY QUEEN

Started by amsaeedzrx, August 07, 2004, 05:39:37 PM

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amsaeedzrx

The more you take excuse
The more I get confuse

Your dazzling attitudes generates
The greatest vision that that migrates

You opt a little high pride
Not knowing that you'll be a bride

Think not with nostalgia
You'll always move with regalia

Decorated with adorable lilacs
Accompanied by assorted cadillacs

Envy not my glaring queen
She is always the reigning queen.

Ibro2g

Mazzzaaaaaaaaa!There is a new guy in town and I have a feeling this guy is out for the trophy, wtch out tata!
Welkom Amsaeed...u will have a lovly stay here as a poet obviosly...
Safety and Peace

amsaeedzrx

Ha! Ha!! Ha!!!  :lol:

Nagode Ibro2g!

In fact, It seemed as if we are at the same direction. But if you could remember  your more exciting poems are more worth commending. However, we are goingalong the way and we shall maintain the "TEMPO"

Hi!!!

Anonymous


Fulani Poet

Great attempt. Seems to me like the rhymes are contrived.
haring my life in simple poems