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Offline Maleeq

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Oh! damsel in distress
« on: November 28, 2006, 07:33:39 PM »
Oh! damsel in distress
What ails thee?
What makes the soft radiant glow
Abandon thy face?
I gaze at you
Alone, save for you
In seldom speech
Inviting none but malaria
With the sun
Long dead
In it's place
The negro sky
Oh! damsel in distress...
akavelli da don till I`m gone!!!

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Oh! damsel in distress
« Reply #1 on: November 28, 2006, 08:28:05 PM »
mayn,i wonder where u get ur inspirations.keep it up
ife's a teacher u have 2 learn from

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Oh! damsel in distress
« Reply #2 on: December 10, 2006, 05:09:55 PM »
There is something alluring about a 'damsel in distress!' I guess this what Maleeq is trying to portray.
haring my life in simple poems

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Re: Oh! damsel in distress
« Reply #3 on: June 03, 2007, 05:41:07 PM »
Oh Protector thy prey to ye
Save this child from cunning words
invite him to lighten up poetry
for thou place, where the best men art
is inspiration Inc. uncompromised
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