do you love me

[Ibro2g]

Do you love me or do you not
you told me once but I forgot
so tell me now and tell me true
so I can tell you I love you
of all the people that I've ever met,
you're the one I can't forget
and if I die before you do
I'll go to heaven and wait for you
if you're not there by judgement day,
I'll know you went the other way
I'll give the angels back their wings,
and risk the loss of everything
just to prove my love is true  
               

[Anonymous]

I would have said yes, but not until I get an engagement ring ;D
Kool poem, nice, short & simple

[ummita]

I would have said yes, but not until I get an engagement ring ;D
Kool poem, nice, short & simple

Hafsat, honeslty speakin: U gimme d laffs.

Nice one. Great piece 2 mention.

[Waziri]

Katsinian,

Tis simple and sincere, tis an outpour of emotions tis what a true poetry means. I love it.

Katsinian U did not comment on my poor-try filled with rhyming  ___tion. You see the point I was trying to make that day? It was monotomous, poetry with rhyme some times tend to be boring and the writer often get obsessed with the rhyme without considering the amount of sense or nosense he is making.

But nevertheless this your poem is a good one by God u r almost winning my vote.

Cheers

[MohammedIbrahim]

I must admit,this one is  ;)......i was just even wondering...anya ba kai bane shakespare na generation din mu? :).Nah wuz juss joking baka yi kokari ba :P  ;D.(dont mind me) :D
     kai amma mallam nice poem u have there keep it up

[Maleeq]

     kai mallam kana kokari
  like i told u earlier on this is undeniably the most awesome and emotional love poem you've written.
     2 thumbs up.
   kee them comin ;)

[Ibro2g]

one engagement ring coming up hafsat...wait till I win...I`m too poor to do that now. ;D
I was`nt online 4 quite sometime now but i surely will check it out NOW.
And thanks folks...bu

[Ibro2g]

I must have been diconnected ;Dhehe. I just pop in to tell moHT. U have seen the shakespare of ur time. take a look at Niggadazz and wazziri.