I love you

[Maleeq]

It's like a team desperate for a win
Or the boy crying for his toy
Perhaps the girl eager to have a curl
It's like Mr. Bob looking for a job
Or the lady expecting her first baby
Well, it's the cat searching for a rat
May be a bull hungry for some food
It's some thugs looking for some drugs
Parhaps the patient in need of attention
All these are nothing but worthless words
Endreared in the face of the world  
'cos my love for you
Is so pure and true
That words from my mind
Could easily fill a vine
I love you so very much.

[Bilyaminu]

that was cool nididaz but how many day did it take u to compose that, anyway
nice one there

[Maleeq]

    well bilya this is beyond your imagination

[Aydee Fella]

komot my friend ,no be fluke u fluke am.

[Maleeq]

hey dagoodfella u know what i've doin a lot of thinkin waz it 6 months or 5 months ago u last posted a poem?///////????? :-/ :-/ :-/ ;D ;D

[Aydee Fella]

tell mi boi is it mandatory dat we paste poems all over the place :-/

[Maleeq]

   of course its not mandatory but eemmmmmmmm next time u just shut up while others(me) do their thang ;D ;D ;D

[Ibro2g]

hahaha. And aydee u should appreciate it. dazzo keep it up ;D ;D :D :D :D ;D :D ;)

[Maleeq]

  ibro2g    akwai ka da fadan gaskiya

[Ibro2g]

kadan ma kagani ;D

[Waziri]

Maleeq,

Ur poem is good, try making it to appear more apt, I mean sharpen the curves of your expressions. In poetry words are suppossed to be meticulously chisseled and carefully arranged.

All the same, the poem is good.

Waz.

[Ibro2g]

:D ;DAbdul maleeq, lern from the pros... ;)

[Maleeq]

yoh waz thanx for tha tip.
  really appreciate it.

[Ibro2g]

keep da pride man.